If

by 6*9lily6*9   Jun 25, 2005


If your getting tired of me
let me know
ill try to make you happy
just so you wont let go

if i sometimes bore you
please tell me soon
so i cant be more entertaining
and you wont have to stare at the moon

if someday you want to leave me
let me know how i can make you stay
let me know how i can win you back
its just that I'd die if you ever went away

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  • 17 years ago

    by PoetryKnight

    I liked your passion in this poem. Even though it was short, i was drawn into it.
    Aaron

  • 18 years ago

    by ♥?♥

    GREAT POEM..
    I LUVED IT..
    BUT WEN I FINISHED I WAS LIKE F/UCK LOL CUZ I WANTED 2 READ MORE BUT DIS IS GOOD

  • 18 years ago

    by Lemon Square Bear23

    Awwww very sweet n a very nice n understanding flow awsoe keep up the good work dont quit ir give up on poetry b/c it never gives up on u n dont be a stranger hun 5/5 always
    kate

  • 19 years ago

    by Chelsey

    that is a very good poem and i can relate to it please check out some of my stufff.~Chelsey

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