Very good poem. 5/5

Amanda.

The poems is great, with nice rhyming. Not a great rhythm at the end, but still good.

very unique poem! i definatly like the style. It was powerful too! good job 5/5

hey awesome poem!.....allow me to do the honors of trying to get this poem on the highest rating cuz it DESERVES it.....5/5. Peace! //ari\\

I think this was pure excellence...You have some serious talent here. keep it up =]

thank you guys :D this means alot xxx

the box around you is our damn skool hayley!!!!!!!!

Wow.. this poem is just amaziingg.. like there's so many words to describe this poem. Awsome jobbbbb.. ii LOVE this poem.. iit looks like you got one creative mind : ). 5/5