by abcede Jun 25, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
Why does she put herself |
by Chelsey
This poem really shows off your talent and i love your wordplay. You can really create vivid pictures by the words you use. Thanks for the comments on mine! |
again with the ryhme... its realy good though |
by !*!Zoe!*!
Oh, I like this poem. I really, really, really like the verse: "but this girl is lost/and she cannot be found/she is falling in darkness/without any sound. It's beautiful. However, I'm not too sure about the last line, it seems a little forced and out of subject. Maybe it's just becuase I don't understand what you're trying to say. Care to enlighten me? |
by Princess09
damn ur a great poet nvr stop 5/5 |