damn thts good great work :) even tho its sad i have a few like tht too

it was really good up to the last line..

Sometimes people find fun in pain. Nice subject!

good job! keep it up!
luv always,
Ashli

~awesome poem!!! it was totally moving :-) .... and thanks for reading my poem~

~Krissy~

Really brilliant but so sad. I liked its
rhyme. really beautifully written.
much love, Marjan

the poem was good!!! it flowed so well together!! you have such great choice of words.. it reminds me of some of my poems.. i guess because yours are also sad but also hold alot of truth to them.. alot of emotion is shown through your writting.. and its beautiful that you can express it so well.. bye bye EJ

Surprising twist at the end, I loved it...I relate so much to this one, I know what you are going through!!! Great flow and rhyme, keep up tha good work!!!

*Hugs sabrina*