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I hear the gentle summer breeze in my ear it slowly dries my tears, I see the sky it puts my mind at some sort of ease because I now relize he is noting but a tease I see the ever changing moon which is in some ways like me and you I smell fresh clean grass which reminds me he is now my past I sink my feet in the dirt and try not to hurt I also try to smile because ill only be here for a little while...

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