well i think its good.

"you never should have tossed
my heart, thrown it away
maybe someone will pick it up one day"

I love the ending. Sadly sweet poem, hon. Lovely job.

xxx

I liked it all... until the ending... maybe if you changed a bit around... it would sound more....... poemetic? but I liked the begining. <3 xoxo

good rhymes.. its a good poem..
not much not to like.. if that made sense.. haha so yea nice job man

wow...very good poem...i almost cried that feeling has to hurt i'v felt like that before you described it very well and with great emotion perfect choice of words...5/5

hey this is a good poem and very sad it sound like a break up poem tho no offense tho its good kk well if you wanna talk e-mail me caliz_chicka@yahoo.com yu seem kool and like me kk *Tracy*

Wow, intense. it's good. what a way to show emotion. (i see that chicks are starting to hit on u) p.s. love ur other poems