hey, cool poem!! liked it!! ^,^

........are you sure you're not a born songwriter? aaaaah they'd make killer lyrics but they still play off very well as in a poem! 5/5

haha thanx for the compliments guys! I wish I knew how to play the guitar...when I eventually learn how to play it I want to write my own music! thanx again!

i didnt realy understand it well...but it sounds kidna agressive...in a way...but it also sounds kinda sweet...i dunno! im cnfused!! ...good job i guess...i dunno5/5

aww ur girl friend is one lucky chica!

aw that was lovely. you are such a sweet person. Everything you write comes from the heart.

I loved this poem just as much as I loved all the other ones!
~*~Elizabeth~*~

5 stars again!! =D

is great work... keep it up ! 5/5