YOU

by silhouette fairy   Jun 26, 2005


Sitting alone
wishing you were here
with the touch of your hand
my body melts
my mind screams with pleasure
but you're not here
I'm all alone
wishing for you presence
with the touch of your lips
my soul melts
my heart crumbles
but still you're not here
I'm all alone
wishing you were there
to help me when i cried
but no you weren't there
now can i really say i love you
or should i say i hate you
no neither, i should say
I MISS YOU!!!

**# if you think "YOU" isn't an appropriate title for this poem then please give me some of your ideas
please and thank you#**
ALLALONE

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  • 19 years ago

    by silhouette fairy

    there really is no guy that i write about he is just my dream guy i'll just have to talk to you personally about it bec.
    luv ya
    e-chan

  • 19 years ago

    by an endless sky

    E-cahn are any of ur poems about a guy???? or someone u are in love with if so plez tell me b/c it u tell me I'll tell u who I write bout b/c u seem 2 want 2 know really bad!

  • 19 years ago

    by silhouette fairy

    thanks for commenting christopher
    *allalone*

  • 19 years ago

    by Christopher Cole

    I think it was great and the title is alright but i would probably use I Miss You or Im All Alone