by Mandy Lou Jun 26, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
If you're the one |
aww so sad. im sorry... keep ur head high love will find you wherever you are. never give up your true love will find his way to you... |
by Minkus
I liked the rhythm in this one, good rhymes too. 5/5. |
aww hope your feeling ok! i was really good though!! |
such a sweet poem...great write..you're a really talented writer, girl, so dont waste your gift!! |
by Kane Burden
Hate that feeling, loosing someone you treasured the most, but you expressed it well in this poem :) Great Work, kind regards from Kane |