My Dreams

by Jerbear   Jun 26, 2005


I love you,
I know I do,
I know who you are,
it might sound bizarre,

but I dream of you constantly,
I dream that you love me,
I feel your heart beating,
I love the way of your leading,

you compliment me on everything,
I feel your love in your breathing,

*this poem isn't finished yet but I'll try to finish it as soon as I can!!!

*hey it means the world to me when you vote and comment...so please...you know!

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  • 18 years ago

    by Deathcanwait

    Hey! thanks for commenting on mine! really appreciated. it was saying that she is like a drug, and makes me high in a good way.

    this ones really good! it flows really well and the rhymes altho not perfect rhymes, work anyway! great poem!

    Keep Hope

    Matt

  • 18 years ago

    by Chelssღ

    Great Poemm!=)

  • 18 years ago

    by Princess

    I kno this sounds so dumb but im dead serious wen i read this poem i cryed cuz i have felt this about sum one its great even if u didnt finish it i luv it as is

  • 18 years ago

    by Just Wishes

    Dear do complete the poem.it has a wonderful music. thx for ure comment.

    keep it up,
    just wishes(Amanda)

  • 18 years ago

    by Patrick Davis

    Good job but i must say it needs
    some work

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