damn a lil scary but niicely written

WOW! very good ending...my jaw literally dropped...the blessed suicide thing really got to me...thanx for sharing!

The last part was amazing!! I love how you used "blessed suicide" that was very awesome!! i think that'll give me a few ideas!! thanx! haha newayz you did very well, flowed nicely and i didn't see anything wrong except "wondering if I should turn water on high and watch it overflow." that was one line and overflow was at the end, try shortening it! newayz great job!! 5/5!!

Awwl.. very sad. but i liekd it up.. yet another great poem xox