Flood Of Blood

by Lonely Heart .ღ.   Jun 26, 2005


I am lying here on the floor
can no longer move, can live no more

the empty bottles of pills lay by my side
Puddles of blood underneath where I lay

Wrists gashed open,
I can now go on
No longer in pain or tolerating this world

I am no one my family deserves much better
no one loves me except my suicide letter

I Lay here beside it,
it knows how I feel
When I am down its always here

No more worries No more pain
This life that I live, its time to refrain

no one will miss me,
will I ever be found?
I don't really care because it don't matter now

my body's getting colder
the floor is now filled with blood
Its no longer puddles, Instead its a Flood

I am finally at rest
im free from all stress

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  • 19 years ago

    by shawn hoskins

    Wow i really liked it flowed real good and all i can say is you got talent

  • 19 years ago

    by Melanie

    Very nice and if its true hang in there you will get over it and very nice poem it flowed nicley but the last line kinda threw me off keep writting good job4/5

  • 19 years ago

    by Brookeღ

    Nice amount of detail! Very well done! I think it would be easier to read if you broke it up into stanzas. Just my opinion.
    "one loves me except my suicide letter" I think you meant no one.
    Anyways those are minor issues. You did an amazing job! ~Brooke~

  • 19 years ago

    by Princess09

    damn chills major ggod one again

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