by Lonely Heart .ღ. Jun 26, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
I am lying here on the floor |
Wow i really liked it flowed real good and all i can say is you got talent |
by Melanie
Very nice and if its true hang in there you will get over it and very nice poem it flowed nicley but the last line kinda threw me off keep writting good job4/5 |
by Brookeღ
Nice amount of detail! Very well done! I think it would be easier to read if you broke it up into stanzas. Just my opinion. |
by Princess09
damn chills major ggod one again |