wow another great poem, i love it sooooo much good job!
~*lindz*~

Hello lol sorry to the point...
This is a really good poem, sad but very true :D(the poem not the fact that its good lol)
Only one thing I would like to point out and give advice to.."Cupid, please stop messing with my heart,
I can’t take it anymore,
My whole heart is falling apart,
I don’t want it to hurt no more,"

Okay, you used the word more twice at the end of sentences and that put the flow off, not good for the begining of a poem, maybe try something like "loving has become sore" I dunno im thick lol :D

Other than that this poem was really good and I enjoyed reading it :D

x)

Dunno what disformed those words sorry O_O

Great work! Very sweet and full of heart! Keep it up!

Much Love
~*hAiLy*~

I dont think the structure quite works but it has a really lovely hidden meaning that only the author could understand thanx for finally giving me an honest opinion

Ahhh, that was great, and it was sad thou :(. keep up the great writting. i look forward to reading more

I think the poem if perfect it come full of emotion and is so gd i love it

Wow, great poem. I loved it. Emotion filled poem. great job.
~ItalianStallion A.K.A. Joe~

I really loved that poem GOOD!!JOB!!!

I really like this poem it shows alot of true meaning
keep up the great work
hold ya head high

Wow delo that so amazing
hug and kisses
~jenny~