*sigh* i wish my scars would go away, im sick of hiding my wrist, it would raise too manyy problems if my dad found out. great poem tho! xxx luv steph |
by Sarah Ann
I like the positive attitude at the end. yes hun, life will go on and hopefully you will find better things along your way...dont look back upon something you can never change. Excellent write. Take care xxx |
omg this poem made me cry it was so wonderfully worded u did i a great job...i know exactly what ur talking about.....i feel the same exact way great poem 5/5 |
by VampyraKiâ€
very well done. the flow and rhyme were great please keep it up |
by Emilia
thanks for the comment on my poem.. meant a lot.. 5 stars for this one... hugs |
by Marjan
this poem rocks. you're so talented. |
by David Paul
oh you have beautiful poetry. I love your style. I'll put you on my favs. another 5. kilman = David B. |
Hugs. I hope you are okay. Keep on being strong. There is good in life. Keep the faith! |
Wow what a great poem, very deep and emotional...I love it!!! Hope that you are ok now??? I relate to this poem 100 %... Great job =0) |
I liked this poem it's spoken with real meanings and words.. And i usually don't like poems that don't rhyme. But i liked yours.. well keep on writing. |
good job, once again a great poem. keep writing and dont ever stop! you ahve real talent 5/5 |
by EJ
Hey good poem.. it gets a little ruff in spots to read but it still expresses what it needs to.. bye bye EJ |