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aww its so sad! 5/5 |
by CHOKE
OMG, that was so sad hun!!!If only ppl didn't treat others like that, but that's life, unfortunately, I'm just glad I have friends to help me through times like that. |
by lostlllsoul
Wow |
by pain is me
Very powerful... |
That was rlly sad but i kno the feeling....thx for ur ongoing comments...u r a rlly good writer and i like ur poems alot!! |
by Angel
I like this one too!! |
by Natalie
Aw wow, Thats really sad. Its so long, But it kept my attention all the way. Really good job =] 5/5 |
by Danielle
Omg that is one of my favorites.. as u can tell i dont have a life....lol |
by Tammie
Wow that is really powerful and it kept me interested right to the end. great work. keep it up 5/5 |
by Angela
Uhhh at first i thought it was acute happy in the end poem, i was all like ooo those boys are gonna get it... but how wrong was i??.. what a surprise!! haha i like this one too.. good job... but i dont get it.. who killed the ant??.. the mean boy??.. or the poet one?? lol |
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