Excellent job... That's one of your first poems? Wow... You have some potential, and natural talent! You are an outstanding poet, who cares if you are a beginner. I am too! Keep it up! I can't wait to read more from you! 5/5

thnks 4 ur support i've never read any of your poems but i am sure they are good but of course i have only been on this site a few weeks and really haven't done a whole lot

peace out