Gr8 work! luvd this poem!no rhymes were forced at all! 5/5
~*Who Cares?*~

OMG!!!!! I can relate to this so much....
Lurvs
~Miranda~

Ang,, this poem was beautiful. and it it amazingly writtin!! 5/5 all the way!! loved it!!

LoTa LoVeN,,

TiFfAnI

Great tpoic I think a lot of people can relate, like me. I know how it feels when someone you thought was so close to you becomes more distant. But I have also been on the other side as well and I totally regret ever turning my back on a friend in need. So I can totally relate. Great topic and poem.

That was really good, I hope u and ur friend r better soon, u have incrediable talent as a writer and from ur poem ur an awesome friend

@my

This one is great
5/5

Oh my gosh i know exactly how you feel.. we were best friends up untill like 5 months ago we had been friends since i was 4 .. awww it makes me so sad 11 years and we just drifted apart.. and now she has a new bestfriend ok sorry im just rambling on bout my life lol.. anyways it was a great poem as you can obviously tell i can relate ha ha ha.. 5/5

~!*FallenTears~!*
~!*Meaghen!~*

Awww
thats so sad
;(
reminds me of almost every single friend i possessed.
i never knew why i had no one.
and now i think its happening agian.
:(
im so sad.
5/5
no complaints or criticism
~Emah

Wow, the last stanza was very hard hitting and powerful, and i really enjoyed this poem, maybe cause i've been through a similar experience. Keep up the good work.