Fate Concealed in Time (*Song)

by Leah20   Jun 27, 2005


Hey Miss. Perfect
Is it really worth it
Giving your life away?
It's all about impression
And you're your own obsession
You'll rule the world someday

And sometimes appearances are hard to keep
Plastic Surgery is your reprieve
It's all about you, isn't it
True friends are come by
And maybe some will stand by
To watch you fall on your face

Hey Miss. Perfect
Is it really worth it
Giving your life away?
It's all about impression
And you're your own obsession
You'll rule the world someday

Straight-A grades in high school
You force yourself to act "cool"
Your life's been handed to you on a silver platter
And maybe someday
After self discovery
You'll find that you really don't matter

So hey Miss. Perfect
Maybe you deserve this
A Fate concealed in time
And someday it will be revealed
But for now it's only concealed
Yours now lost to find

When your kids grow up they'll hate you
Because in comparison they pale to
Your accomplishments
And no matter what
You'll never gain their trust
No way to harness them

So hey Miss. Perfect
Was it really worth it
Giving your life away
And there's always time for second impressions
And mending those neglections
But only if you commit to stay

Being perfect wasn't worth it
And no one will ever deserve this
A Fate concealed in time

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  • 19 years ago

    by Anne Conner

    Hey that was great. I absolutly loved it. The message was awsome. Being perfect isn't what life is all about, even though as teens we sometimes think it is.
    ~anne~

  • 19 years ago

    by Richard

    kewl song i think it would be good a good hit or w/e anwyays 5/5 for u

  • 19 years ago

    by ßeAuTiFuLlY~bRoKeи

    wow maybe I'll hear it on the radio some day lol. I see it's only a 4? why is it that anything other then sad poems get under rated...? well I'm giving it a 5 cause it's really good!
    ~Christina

  • 19 years ago

    by abcede

    aww.. so original and cute!! i liked it and i liked the flow! uhm..oh! the part where it talks about "your kids will hate you.." lol.. i was like .. WOAH!! it's kinda funny now, though! great job.. keep it up!
    LOve always,
    Abcede ^,^

  • 19 years ago

    by SmileeItsBritt

    haha whoa dude...did u write that about Jamilynn? HAHA lmao...I love you leah!!!