this is a definite, bold, and familiar subject to write about. I think your readers will be able to connect; there is someone like this in everyone's life. Great write.

--christa//no motiv?

haha whoa dude...did u write that about Jamilynn? HAHA lmao...I love you leah!!!

aww.. so original and cute!! i liked it and i liked the flow! uhm..oh! the part where it talks about "your kids will hate you.." lol.. i was like .. WOAH!! it's kinda funny now, though! great job.. keep it up!
LOve always,
Abcede ^,^

wow maybe I'll hear it on the radio some day lol. I see it's only a 4? why is it that anything other then sad poems get under rated...? well I'm giving it a 5 cause it's really good!
~Christina

kewl song i think it would be good a good hit or w/e anwyays 5/5 for u

Hey that was great. I absolutly loved it. The message was awsome. Being perfect isn't what life is all about, even though as teens we sometimes think it is.
~anne~