excellent as always! 5/5 liked how you described your escape. ^__^ Peace and Luv Always, //ari\\

I like how you describe the strong the sensations that at the end I got a complete picture of a woman running, struggling not to fall, like in a dream. The whole poem is brilliantly created metaphors, also your words have much intensity. I can relate to the theme you wrote about, because I often wrote about such feelings and notions acting up in my mind.
Please, read my poem "Upside down" in my featured poems section, it's about the same theme. Thank you a lot.

Lots of love
Sabine

Another truly great poem. You have a unique and amazing talent. Please keep writing your woeds mean so much

Awesome poem great write.

Whoa i'm speechless i loved it
i hate reality... but i hate being a daytime dreamer too
you're an excelent writer
keep on the good work!
thanks for commenting on my poem ;)

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