This struck me as deep and brooding! Your emotions as always perfectly intact within each line! Well done, love ya~Holly

Heather, Well done once again. Your pattern of words and the flow.....flawless. Beautiful job.

hugs and love, Ann

Awesome job once again. Keep it up Heather...

Smiles, Hugs and Love, Angela

Loved it! keep up the good work check out my new one!!

Chris

interesting work and nicely put. Very good.

ha very cool! love it.

~PLP~ lil slam~ lots of hugs and love, hope everythings going ok and stuff.

Awesome job, as always!

(Ps. didn't realize this was your work. seems you changed your name)

Lovely job on this, hun ;)

WOW HEATHER! Although that was short it was filled with so much emotion...I really hate thinking that there's things people don't know...because normally when someone says that they've had or are going through a hard time..I'm so sorry if you are and may God Bless you..But heather you are such an inspiration to others including me and since your like that..you need to be strong..I know you've probably heard that but I know you can do it..I have faith in you! Great Job heather! 5/5
Love always,
~Chelsey~

the secrets between the lines, I guess all writers do that, its so easy to put the words down, but many times there are hidden words within the words, or as you said, the invisable ink........please know you are special, and God has a huge plan for your life. Your way to talented, you can spread a message guick......thank you again for sharing.....believe in love, and believe in God, Love ya becky

HOLY! WOAH!!!! that is like one of the most brilliant pieces i've EVER read! I'm so in shock...WOAH..your soo good!! amazing! Holy...I just don't have words to describe how amazing that was...I'm sooo SOOo sooo SOO glad I decided to come check out your poems and I'll check out much more!
Take care and mucho luv

I <3 it! Ommmg! Um, please comment on some of mine, seeing that no one really does, lol, im new, and Id like to be known..spread the w urd...!

great job 5/5

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Nice. Great to read your poems as usual.

WOW mate! Beautiful! your title captured me, and the story is so real, I think we do have things that no one would ever know! it doesnt mean that we are hiding them, i think its just that sometimes others can't see those things! I love it when you write like that.

much Respect,
Rua Francis.

U said so much in a such little paragraph good work

Very thought provoking Heather.

Dayyymmmn.
how about we trade our skills haha. :)
i loved the poem it was just wow...completly flawless. amazing amazing job.
i love you!