LOVED IT!! the last couple lines... or the last vers.. the last part anyways... reminds me of how it was before i started having a relationshi[p with my boyfriend... he was there.. but i didnt really notice, you know...
keep up the good work..
much love
amanda

ps.. if you could read my older poems the ones lower on my list... thatd be great.... i did that for you cuz i know that thats what i would like.... treat others how you want to be treated.. that stuff...
thanks

*changes swear word to something else*

Thank youuuuuu ;)

I think you should know that this poem really gets to me... rose, i have to say- i wish you were older, cause you sound so wonderful! 5/5, of course

Tis true the nice guys always finish last.. then again.. so it seems, the nice girls seem to finish last as well.
Anywho..
Great poem. Much liked.