Hm, a one. Well i guess someone has finally retaliated from the onslaught of my honest words. Just didnt seem like a very creative or mature way to deal with things.
-A

"without your touch my flesh rests cold"

whhat an ending. . . this is really a fantastic little mellismatic piece you've produced. I think its great. Although I dont' understand the prick who gave it a one. Obviously they didnt read it or they have a mental disorder.

you used some of my most favorite words of solitude. 'gasping' - 'falling' - 'pressed' - 'serenaded' - 'damning' - 'blurring.'

The sense of absolute pandamonium in this piece is just sensational. I enjoyed every line.

Love the whole theme of 'outcry.'

5/5