wow that was excellent! great flow and rhyme. i can deff relate to! awsome poem your talented!
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:) i can ralte 2 this sadly:( but i guess thats the way life goes and yeh i gues i need 2 take wat life throws at me wif a smile but yes 5/5 gr8 job i luv ur work

Sweet. <3 I liked it lots I give it a five. <3 xoxo keep it up <3

Reminds me of my poetry.. that's weird and cool at the same time.. yea. wow.. anyways.. since i think my poem is the shit.. im giving u a 5/5 for awesomeness.. :D

lovely flow. you have beautiful work...

that was a great poem.

yes, my poem called "My Water Angel" is true. its about my brother that died about 7 years ago.

that was so good. it kinda reminds me of someone. 5/5

This is such an honest heartfelt poem.You really capture the agony of unrequited love.It hurts to lose one we love or to let go-at any age(which is why I can relate so strongly-going through something a bit similiar)but as long as you never lose the capacity to love, things work out.The rhyme scheme is good on this and it flows nicely(a couple touch ups on punctuation and stuff-nothing major-might make it stronger), but what really makes this poem is what you say and how you said it, the images and emotions are powerfully effective.Really great poem.

I liked this poem 5/5