by Insane Inside And Out Jun 27, 2005
category :
Dark, fantasy /
dark, horror
**I just wrote it at night when I couldn't sleep. It's something different than what I usually write I guess. Not exactly a poem. It's kind of the results of a little writing session I guess. Tell me what you think anyway! LOL** |
by Justin
Wow.. that was really good, I'm glad I checked out this poem, it was really dark and had great description, I think you did a great job, doing something different for a change is good to do too, keep up the good work, 5/5 |
by ntv650
Hey, that was quite creepy. Loved the terminologies. Despite the fact it doesnt rhyme its really good, it does have rythm despite not having rhyme :) |
Wow awesome poem, such vivid words. I like the ending alot. |