oooo...its so sad...but just a beautiful poem...awesome job..5/5..

thx for commentin on my poems ill always do for urs

God job

its made me tear up cuz i jsut got in a fight with my dad

great job though

I LOVE IT !!
5%5

Hey i luv it. as was already sed, all ur poems r so near to u, its great how u can do that.
it really made me think about my relationship wit my dad.
thanku.
great. 5/5
xx