Again, wonderful poem, you certainly have a way with words. I like your style of writing, very descriptive and fluent, I had a beautiful picture painted in my head the entire time. Take care.
-J.M.

I thought this poem was very good

Love the overall feeling/image i got from this. very clear due to the structure and words you chose..

Wilted petals
Fallen to the precious dirt

petals,.. i always think its cliche to use rose/flowers/petals in your poems, but thats just me and my style.. on contrast, i like the idea of it falling.. especially "precious" dirt.. although i'd like to know if theres a reason u used precious, and if so, why.. maybe go into that more.. idunn0..

Wearing thin, deteriate(deteriorate*) into nothing

i also think u should extend this deterioration over more of the piece, as it's a main idea, and a good one.. i liked the way this one flowed and like i said before, the imagery. good job.. 4.5

You have some good imagery going on for you. At first I thought you were talking about death, but reading all the comments, it made more sence that you are writing of a rose. Job well done, M'Lovely.

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Very nice.... great way to present the feelings of wanting to be nothing..... 4/5