B-e-a-utiful

Wow, that was different than any poem I have read before, especially in it's form, but it was still really good and somehow it all fit together really well. Nice job hun! Your friends are luck to have you.

-Tainted Mikochan

I never thought of that comparison between secrets and lies..... its very good..... when i read this it made me think of two lines from two of my unposted poems.... "promises are just lies with pretty little bows"....and..... "we learn from mistakes and mistakes are well learned but mistakes are the things we're all trying to avoid"

**as usual well written and a joy to read**

D 5/5