well to be honest i dont love it.... sorry
i think its differnt and you have ALOT of potential! i cant really judge seeing this is the first poem i have read of urs but to me personally i think its to simple (im not saying its bad)
i love some of the words you have used and even the structure keep writting and you'll get there!
>>4/5<<
*bec* xXx

I think you should make this one longer and elaborate! I think you have a great start and it has potenial. Just my opinion though! ~Brooke~

I like it, simple but broad, displayed and conveyed very nicely. Well done.

Interesting poem! I dont understand it really but it was diferent than other poems i read so I liked it!

short gritty and so so real...I totally understood the feel

Short and easy to read and yet amazingly deep brill write keep it up comment and vote on some of mine x

I like this poem. Its short and sweet, and like they say, good things come in small packages. So.. great job :)

-Anth

i liek it, its short but good. keep writing

whoa! does it really do that? ive been thinking of taking sleeping pills to help me go to sleep... if thats true, then i guess id be better off without it! lol. cool poem 5/5

short, but to the point.. I like it.. and I know exactly what you are saying..

Hey rose.. Liked it i kan relate to not being able to sleep lol.

This is a clever little poem. :)

Short, but very sweet. I really did forget to say please? my apologies (hehe)... so can you please rate some of my poems? Can I view some of yours too? Please? (not trying to come of as annoying, more like childdish... wait, did I just offend myself?) your poem was very interesting and good by the way. ^_^x

Short bt gd xx

liked the poem, it sums up so much, it is like a lot of poets say, the best poems are the ones that can be left to the reader to interperate. I think this is a wonderful poem and i can definately relate to it. I think your a wonderful authror and should continue to write, i think your work is very well done and thought out.

This is slightly different than the first three I read. And it is open to interpretation by the reader. I like poems that are open to interpretation by the reader.

short and sweet great writting i loved it.
keep up the good writing.
Emma5/5

Awesomeness. This is such a cute little poem. Amazing how you can say some much in so little.

and I wasn't kidding about hanging your poem in my locker lol.

This one was ok but your others were alot better