Sunrise to Sunset

by LoVeAbLeShOrTie   Jun 27, 2005


When the sun goes down
All i can do is frown

My body lays sliently there
No one around who cares

As the sun comes up
I have no feeling of warmth from the sun
The only feeling i have is of pain

My skin turns soft
Scars seem to disappear

Until the sunsets
Then my past reappears

I write everyones name on my knife
heres a dedication to my life

I slice twice and the blade is clean
I'll never again be seen

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  • 19 years ago

    by Brookeღ

    Very sad but a creative unique way of expressing feelings! ~Brooke~

  • 19 years ago

    by Clarissa

    amazing job... some powerful meanigs
    5/5

  • 19 years ago

    by BleedingAngel

    Wow what a great poem, very beautiful title, made the poem a surprise =0) I relate 100 % to this one and I hope that you are ok??? Keep writing...

    *Hugs Sabrina*

  • 19 years ago

    by BrokenMisery

    A bit confusing and very simple structure which is a little predictable. Very intresting idea, keep wriing and good luck in the future!

    luv kt

  • 19 years ago

    by Kayla

    I personally think that the poem has a rough flow and that the thoughts are scattered....this is just my opinion though...luv yas mwah

    -kayla-

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