wtf r u on u need to think of something better than death or cutting yourself i dont know what has gotten into u but im worried....you have evan that is all you will ever need....stop thinkin bout death

hun i just wrote this cuz i was bored dont wry i dont think about that..evan has made my life so much better trust me...i dont know what i would do w/o him..thank you for caring...
luv u like a sister always and forever,
ashley

hun this is awesome. but yeah u really need not to think bout this kinda stuff. its not good at all. trust me. well yeah keep up the great poems. 5/5. love ya always,
***aShLeIgH***

I personally think that the poem has a rough flow and that the thoughts are scattered....this is just my opinion though...luv yas mwah

-kayla-

A bit confusing and very simple structure which is a little predictable. Very intresting idea, keep wriing and good luck in the future!

luv kt

Wow what a great poem, very beautiful title, made the poem a surprise =0) I relate 100 % to this one and I hope that you are ok??? Keep writing...

*Hugs Sabrina*

amazing job... some powerful meanigs
5/5

Very sad but a creative unique way of expressing feelings! ~Brooke~