thank you alot ;)

Ill come read some of yours ;)
All i have to say is that I love her, and I hope she can see it!

once again thanks

-Josiah

itz. good slang 2? :] its ok...

wow...i really like this piece..it has alot of feeling! i love ur work!!!

Thank You So much Ill c/r urs in a moment

an dyes I really do care for her, but what more could I say?

-Josiah

hey if your on i just wrote you an e-mail

jessica

Okey thank You, I just got it

-Josiah

"don't be mad
All I want is for you be glad"
Are your poems on repeat?
You said this in the last one...
Oh, well...
I gave this a three.

well there is poetry that your suposed to understand with out putting in the commas :p

-Josiah

Thanks alot I onced did but things have changed :(

-Josiah

OMG........................... im so shocked... to the point that someone could have just shot me... when i read this it was like deja vu. I read her poem as well, and holy ... i met the love of my life on this poetry site... hes older than me, but its working out. He lives far away, but we're going to be together, he would do anything for me, and i would climb a mountain for him. I seems so weird that i found my one true love in life, on this site... its incredibe, we have more love than, magic... its perfection... you too, will find that someday, i hope it can work out with this girl. But if not, then just remember everything happens for a reason, i met my guy for a reason, i like to call fate. you will meet yours too, Much love,

Ana*

I LOVE THIS POEM!!!!!!
That's all I can say.. It's excellent.
5/5 and I would give more if I could.

Tiffany.xox.

Hiya,
have read both poems, Krissta's and yours, have commented on both.
I guess the poems do need a cleanup (puntuation...etc) but I love the feeling I get from reading this, knowing that there are nice guys out there that will always stand by someone.

I hope it all works out for both of yous!
Laterz,
Shirlz.

Thx,

I tend to write freehand, and dont bother.

Thanks for the comment

-Josiah

Wow jebasiah this is a good one i really wish it would've worked out for you two it sux being friends with both of you because it is so hard ot do because i love you both but shh dont tell krissta i love you the most you like a big bro to me so yeah love you buhs