I gave this a 4. Flow could be better.
But then what do I know. You did good

I liked this one. keep it up.

I liked this one. It had a nice emotional touch towards it.

Guilt was better. If you are going to write a good love poem, try and get into the psychology of one of the characters in the poem. This is not as good as Guilt. It sounds even more generic. IT sounded like the driving force behind the poem were words and how they sounded. I always tell people what makes a poem good is not nessecarily the rhymes and the words, cause they can always be changed and fixed later on, but the creative inspiration and idea behind the poem.

its an ok poem I think it would be alot better if you didnt repeat the same words like before and sand, it would be alot better if u used different wording but i liked it
keep it up