Comments : 4wheeler 4ever

  • 19 years ago

    by Aken Sol

    Ha, i'e always wanted to try four-wheeling. Heard it was extremely fun....

    At first, i thought you were rhyming the first and last line in each stanza. But the last three stanzas proved me wrong (maybe you can change it around a bit?). All in all, it was a good poem. Poetry drawn from personal experiences, are always a treat.

    Aken Sol

  • 19 years ago

    by Tammy

    Great poem! I enjoyed it.
    My family and I go 4 wheeling a lot. We usually go more in spring or fall because it is sooo hot in the summer with the helmet on. Playing in the mud is the BEST!! I am always the muddiest one... LOL

    Anyway, that was really good. Keep them coming :)