hi! thanks for checking out my poem.. I voted a 5 on thins one..! keep it up.. hugs

wow i lovedd reading reading this poem i can relate. i know just how u feel. keep up the good wrk

Well I thought it was heart felt and sweet. Some of the rhyming seemed forced. I think it has a lot of potential if you ever want to work on its flow. Not bad.

Sweet and heartfelt...I really like that. :)

xxx

This poem was beautiful. Two thumbs up! xX

Very sweet and nice this would be a good halmarkcard. No I am not being mean it just would take care...

Since most of your poems are about love and friends you miss, try putting a story line to them, no not specefic from your life, it may make the poem a little more universal. And you can add detail to your character how you want.

The poem flows well with sweet sentiment

Very Sweet...good writing

I noticed some forced rhyming but otherwise it was good.

Good flow rhyme consistency i dont need to say much...37 comments im sure did the trick....dang lol....good job

I really feel this way about my baby...very truly spoken...keep holding on to your feelings you can never go wrong with that...well great job 5/5

The first and last stanzas were great, but the second and third were a bit choppy. you might want to word those differently. other than that, 5/5

Awwwwwwwww this is great..just what i feel for my baby...5/5...u r a terrific writer

Very good and a very sweet poem 5/5

Amazing job. i really liked this one. cute and sweet. Very short in a way but an amazing job once again. your very talented. keep it up. keep on writing. love always and forever.

Very nicely written poem.
It flowed well and i liked your choice of words.

Thanks for your comment, i really appreciate it.

xxx cici xxx

I liked the poem...The way you expressed how even though no one's perfect, he feels perfect to you. I heard somewhere that love isn't perfection, it's seeing the other's imperfections PERFECTLY...=)