I know

by jay   Jun 28, 2005


I see you life
i know your game
end even though i do
you still find a way to put me to shame

people in my life have gone
some never to return
and just when the pain is over
my soul starts to burn

life, i give you bargains
even try to make a good trade
but all you do is laugh
and send me running to the blade

people tell me i need to help myself
but i know the perfect way...
I'm gonna take you away from myself...

so get away life
pain is now my lover
ill never forget your game
but now it's game over

this is just a poem that i pulled outta my butt:)
but please let me know wut u think of it n e ways
i love you all& God bless
jay

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  • 16 years ago

    by J u l e s

    I loved it. its great and emotional, even if you wrote it because it was what you were thinking at that moment . it came out wonderful

  • 17 years ago

    by Megin

    Hey jay, thanks for the comment! man it has been awhile what happened to all your other poems? got a new email address its luckymegan03@yahoo.com! email me sometime love ya

  • 18 years ago

    by BECLiKEW0AHH

    Great poem, Its well written.

    Thankyou for the comment, That was a really nice thing 2 say, If u ever need a friend to listen ill be here for you, just email me or sumthin.
    Bec xx

  • 18 years ago

    by martha shaw

    Good poem

  • 18 years ago

    by foreverISgone

    Wow i reallz liked that a bit sad but a verz excellent write indeed