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hey nice job, i liked it, so if this is only ur second, let me tell u something, KEEP WRITING. u are doing very good to be new at this!!!!!!

hey that poem is really good. i like it. i love poetry and you have good poetry. great job. i know how you feel. my b/f that i have now is my everything. and i feel the same way you explained in that poem. 5/5 AWESOME JOB!!

Wow this poem is so beautiful, by the way thanks for commenting on my poems.P.S. your a great writer too.

You made me cry with this one, but that is good thing. Your words touched my heart, and that shows a good poet. Have you got a dictionary? I notice you use spacial as term for area, instead of special as someone or something meaning something dear to you. I thought I proof read aswell, but I am fine one with my dyslexia. anyway, this poem is going to get 5/5. Take care hun.

good job 5/5 good job keep up tha good work thx for all ur comments i really appreciated it

Such a nice feeling.

You can see you mean it.. im happy for you, but love doesnt always end that well... you should always be prepared for the end, i found out. trust me... i learent the hard way.. you can see from my poems :P