very wonderfully written. you express
your feelings beautifully. and it had
a good flow too. I loved it.
much love, Marjan

very good flow.5/5

Oh sweetie - ur so nice. Don't be sad, i am ur friend and Jade likes you too cos she told me. Hugs :)

Oh sweetie - ur so nice. Don't be sad, i am ur friend and Jade likes you too cos she told me. Hugs :)

B.e-utiful! And this poems so heartfelt and emotional. I love your work and when you comment it means alot. So thanks for everything!

Much Love,
Jordan-Paige

excellent poem. I can really relate to this, when you seek god's hel, he hears you. He helped me in so many lost times...I wrote many poems just like this..I can relate. gj. xxx

that is so sad, but the images are so vivid! the message and everything was so clear! great job! 5/5
much love,
Abcede >,<

thats one very emotional poem there . I'ts so beautiful ..flowed wonderfully .It was so sad but still so good .
Keep it up !
April

That has a really good impact on the reader... I don't know there was just something about it!

Well done

-Lyd

That was kool

I love the AbAb pattern. I Dont see it as Much.. Great write!.. 5/5 Take a look at my poems if ud like.. much love

Seth

:( Hearttbreaking. I do hope you are all right. This reminds me of my bedroom floor poem.

I love your style of writing, the rhyme scheme is so good. 5.5

great poem, you have a great style, and this was really powerfull! well done!

Not the best poem I've read about cutting. I really don't care for cutting poems so don't mind my harshness, it's nothing against you I just have something against cutting.

Once again you expressed pain and deep emotion! Your true feelings poured out in this poem. Good work! ~Brooke~

Once again, incredible poem. You have great talent...

Amazing job on this one...The last two could have been in the inspiration section (Dear Mia and this one)...Great job again! 5/5!

aww great job... i hope things turn around for u

your an awesome writer! your poems have so much meaning and again you dont force your words...great job