This is really wonderful for a 5 minute thing and I'm glad you found yourself. Awesome write once again, keep it up.

Smiles, Hugs and Love, Angela

hey no this is really good! i've found that it doesn't matter how fast you wrote it, sometimes the quicest poems you write can be one of your best!

~PLP~ lil slam~ lots of hugs and love~

Strong poem. I hope things are okay with you! I got your message, let me just say thank you and your welcome! If you need anything let me know!
I'll e-mail ya later, wanting to know if you've heard from David...I'm worried about him! Anyhoo...ttyl! Love ya~Holly

Hey super poem hun!!!

Beautiful poem, I got your message and I would like to thank you and I hope you know it all comes from the heart. I wouldn't have it any other way. You're a sweet, young lady, that I've grown to love and care for. Your beautiful talent truly touches my heart. Loved this as well as any piece you write. You're the queen of poetry, I have to say it once again!!!!!! Take care, love ya, Ann

although this poem is "5 minute" i still think it has potential and not at all weak. i like it a lot. wonderful words.

5.5

love and hugs

Nice Title, Great Meaning, a Powerful Message, Something I've Never Thought About Before, You Bring a New Way To See Things, I Like! 5/5 xoxo-Nikki-xoxo

Really good poem..I loved it!

<3, Katie
Thanx for commenting on mine..

how can it be weak if it comes from a strong person your an amazing writer and i love your poetry including this one i really enjoyed the poem
take care
HS

nice

I loved the emotion behind it.. Very nicely written as always.. Keep writing can't wait to read more.. take care xx:

*> : PainOfOne

I loved the emotion behind it.. Very nicely written as always.. Keep writing can't wait to read more.. take care xx:

*> : PainOfOne

may have taken 5 mins to write but its a life time worth of tought

It was very good. You always had a very good talent. Always and forever I thank you for your comments. Take care.
~The Unforgiven

wow... excelent... i really adores your poems... you are one of my favourites..... uyou good talent in it..nice nice nice....

This is a 5 minute masterpiece. It contains originality and passion. This poem has been written really well, worth 5/5. Love Emma xxx

If you want to talk to me, you can check aim. I will be on there from now on. Only because you asked. I feel sorry for you heather. I will speak with you. I am sorry for the way i treated you. You can e-mail me.

No not weak i really like it