I don't understand

by Angel   Jun 28, 2005


Whats up with this
am i all alone
or is no one at home.

I give my feelings,Emotions,Dreams
but most don't notice for what it seems
cant you see that i am not a star
and far from a Diamond and i don't ask for much

i am unique and something great
can you reply to this
simple thought strait
and i thank you for comments and wish for more
whats the point in sending poems
if no one notices.

I only ask for your comments please
i fall just thinking that i give up my
thoughts but no one talks and i fall to my knees.

Give me that feed back
keep me going on
i only ask for words to make me strong

please under stand

my heart is pure
and my mind thicker than sand
i do what i can just looking for fans
simple as this
I don't understand.

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  • 19 years ago

    by Angel

    its all good thanxxx tho

  • 19 years ago

    by ~*Ley*~

    wow i didnt think id see anyone who wrote a poem about getting comments o.O its not bad. it could be better if it flowed easier. it seemed a bit choppy. o.O but what do i know..
    ~*Freak*~

  • 19 years ago

    by Bridgette

    As I said before, do w/e, they're ur poems

  • 19 years ago

    by Angel

    yeah yeah i know
    i am thinking of moving my poems
    or finding another site maybe not
    i will see

  • 19 years ago

    by Bridgette

    Aww, mon cher, you'll be ok, just some people are weird, dont worry about it.