Very creative! "They say a drunk mans words are a sober mans thoughts" so not true! Unique poem I really enjoyed it! Well written and well expressed! Take Care! Brooke~

very wonderfully written. you express
your thoughts very well. keep it up.
marjan

this is such a gr8 poem, i no i dnt no u but i always read ur poems coz they are so gr8 and emotion filled! feel free to read mine!

Wow..that was kind of confusing haha but it was really good 5/5
Becky
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"They say a drunk mans words are a sober mans thoughts" VERY true. I've seen it. BUT very very good poem, well written. and very sweet. well done hun. Rosie xXx

Too bad there isn't an easier truth serum...the fact that the circumstance has to be at such a point...it's really sad. Sometimes the truth hurts, but lies can do so much damage too...I learned that. I wish the truth wasn't so hard for some people...plue there's no guarantee even if you do trust someone.... Anyways...I can tell you're talented. Well done.

Rose
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Hey, this was a cute and interesting poem. Nicely done. Thanks for commenting.

Angel~

I can feel the emotion flow through the words. amazing job. keep writing.

Wow....I really love this poem. Great Job !!

This is an awesome poem... keep writing.. i would love to get to know you better. if that's ok....

Great job on the wording and the word play. It makes you think some to and that is what all good poems should do in my opinion.

Great job! i vote you 5/5