thats so sad .. i hope your dad stops what he is doing .... stay strong hun. If you ever wanna talk about anything you can e-mail me .. I will listen
keep it up with your poems
April

expressive...i'm truly sorry about your father...i would hope the situation is better now but who knows....

I don't quite understand what you said at the bottom...."so i don't get hurt in the future i have to pretend that i have him." *shrugs*

Well take care. Incredible poem.

xxx

Sorry to hear about your dad. Good poem but the rhyme scheme needs a little work it goes back and forth but your pretty good! =D