by Mark Coates Jun 28, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
Wearing a mark of make-up |
Interesting. Makes me feel thoughtful, unlucky im so tired at the min I have no idea what im thinking. |
deeply beautiful...i noticed in the poem about your dad and this one though...some of the "your" should be "you're." Other than that, great! |
by Areyoucrazy
Nice job on the poem |