Wow. Your choice of words never fails to amaze me. I also liked the two different perspectives.

Where did you get the idea for this poem? I think I may have heard something like it before.
-Jaime

you're pretty good at making such simple things sound so pretty and very well rhymed
continue cause i like very much to read you're stuff

. . . p il i ♥

There is a poem just like it called "Footprints in the sand" and is a poem about a man and the LORD.
Visit this site and read it: it sounds a lot like yours but your has a more love theme. Nice Work.
http://www.llerrah.com/footprints.htm