by blackrose1011 Jun 28, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
lasting love
All eternity untangles beneath your fingertips |
by Robert
Its a very sweet poem, i enjoyed reading it, and i can tell its meaningful. well done |
very sweet, nice work <3 |
by †JustAriâ€
Ah, I liked this poem very much. Nice vocabulary....but i suggest that you go with Ismail's advice. That might help you more than I can....Peaces, //ari\\ |
some of what is in this poem is kinda a thing between my boy friend and I. so it makes sence that some people wouldnt get it, its fetured because it was the first one i have been able to write about him, and the only way i could explain to him how i felt... |
what did you like about it, i aperciate the votes, but WHY???? |