Great poem! I voted a 5.. keep it up..!!

what did you like about it, i aperciate the votes, but WHY????

some of what is in this poem is kinda a thing between my boy friend and I. so it makes sence that some people wouldnt get it, its fetured because it was the first one i have been able to write about him, and the only way i could explain to him how i felt...

Ah, I liked this poem very much. Nice vocabulary....but i suggest that you go with Ismail's advice. That might help you more than I can....Peaces, //ari\\

very sweet, nice work <3

Its a very sweet poem, i enjoyed reading it, and i can tell its meaningful. well done