by abcede
wow... that's definately my favorite you have written!! 5/5.. AWESOME JOB! |
by Sarah Ann
awww that is really good. I hope you can keep this promise because I am sure he would be so happy about it, take care hun xxx |
wow. this poem was really really good. ur a really good poem writer and you have every reason to brag. :) anyways thanx for commenting |
by Jason Meres
Well written, and made ever better by the emotion laced throughout. I can relate in a very large way. |
by VampyraKiâ€
wow thats is really good |
OMG! This is exactly the problem I had! I cut myself after I made the promise to my boyfreind and messed stuff up. Great poem! |
by Stephanie
I give your poem a 5..I love your poem because it reminds me of my promise to my boyfriend about me stopping cutting myself...i love it so keep up the good work...~steph~ |
wow i can relate so well...i loved this poem it was realy good u r really talented!!! keep writing!! 5/5 |
by InMyWorld
wow i really liked this...i can also relate. i went through the same thing and my boyfriend made me promise to stop cutting and to go to him for help...it was hard, but it worked. take care and good job :) |
Oh wow. that is really good.5/5..that is the same promise i made to my b/f. i really liked that poem keep up the good work.. |
by kate
wow 5/5 lovely but sad poem but well done im glad to hear youve ot such a great bf .take care/ |
by ChocolateXtc
I loved it its the exact same thing that happend to me but he did leave me when i broke the promis the first time. keep up the good work tho |
wow thats a really big promise. when my boyfriend first found out I cut he tried to make me promise I would quit, and when I didn't he broke up with me, we're back together now and Iv'e made the same promise, so I know how that is. I hope it all works out for you! and also, great poem! are you showing it too him?? |
I can relate very very well! i liked your writing and you kept it vivvin (as in you kept it goin great and straight) great job!! 5/5 |
Not only was that extremely well written, but it also flowed well and had a very powerful message, absolutely wonderful. Take care. |
by sara
this poem is great lots of props!!!!! |
by David Paul
Don't lose him. I lost my girl to cutting and that only made me do it more. Do whatever you can to stop. kilman = David B. 5/5 (wish I could give it more) |
This is an excellent poem hun! I can totally relate to this poem! 5 |
by Emilia
Great poem Ashley!! I voted a 5! wow!! =D Please check out my new poem "Endless Love" thanks a lot.. hugs |
by Rolo
Once again, wonderful poem. I'm so glad you were able to make such a promise. I hope you keep it, and I wish you luck. Again, very well written...just great. I think you've just earned a spot on my favorites. =) Keep writing! You have great talent. |