aww i hope u get through this real soon, its a gorgeous poem!

I think it's very sweet you wanna stop cutting for your boyfriend. This is a very good poem. and so many people can relate to it. I loved it.

Clouds n ur Is.

That is strong words and i hope he stands/stood with you still today. You have a very interesting style and rhymes. Your flow is not always obvious which is a good thing, but sometimes the very short lines makes it obvious to your reader what you’re going to say. I like your style but sometimes it can become very unoriginal, so just be careful of writing phrases and lines that heaps of other people have written, or unoriginal circumstances without something that makes it truly yours. I did like the poem; it has some good rhythm to it. Keep it up and stay strong.
luv kt

It's great that you have someone you care about strongly enough to make a promise like that to.

I love the way your flow seems so natural.

And thank you very much for the great comments you left me. :)

i'm so glad that you are done cutting! it is such a shame that people sometimes feel that they need to do this! wonderful poem, and a wonderful promise to make! hope all is well!

hey, great poem. shows alot of emotion. i love your work. keep it up. 5/5
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Paulette