wow,that was pretty cool. keep up the good work.

nice poem...very dark.keep it up,
--emily

nice job there...creating a grisly scene in the woods...interesting.

xxx

I liked it a lot. Very dark and gruesome. Keep it up!

i really liked it..man i just like all of your poems!! good

Wooooooooooow excellent poem again very dark keep it up love your work

Wow, awesome! i would loove to do that to someone :) You are a great writter, your very deep and i like that. Keep up the good work Lad.

-Yours Truly, Jennifer.

Hmm .. interesting.. pretty darn random ending.. with also WEIRD imagery.. i loved it
kt x

Pretty Cool But The Title Says The Rest

Appropriate title

That was a great poem

Ummmm......Very dark poem....scary...and...hmmm very... very dark...ahaha...
-Ashley

Quite disturbing, but in a good way. You convey the scene so well, it really brought the poem to life.
I also like the ending, it adds a brilliant element of terror.
Take care and keep it up~Holly