I think this is great, a real good poem and i love the last 2 lines, if you improve it anyway id sure like to read it cos its amazin the way it is xxx

passed instead of past
once instead of on
best=right or left

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its okay,just needs some proofreading fixes :)

Thanks hon

Very good. =)

aww, i have a slight understanding of this poem. but noy from my own experience. apart from the lying part
but anyway, very good poem hun
take care
xox

I can relate this poem and i remember someone hehe,, well its great to read this kind of poets enjoyable. by the way thanks for the compliment of mine god bless

I loved the last stanza. It was a beautiful way to end a great poem. The emotions were real and I could tell it came straight from your heart. Well done.